高二作文“中學(xué)生聽(tīng)MP3”

　　假如你是李華，最近你班就“中學(xué)生聽(tīng)MP3”的現(xiàn)象進(jìn)行了一次討論，請(qǐng)你將以下討論結(jié)果給某英文報(bào)社編輯（editor）寫信，客觀反映情況。詞數(shù)100左右。

　　1. 時(shí)髦；2. 聽(tīng)英語(yǔ)煥發(fā)精神；3. 聽(tīng)英語(yǔ)提高英語(yǔ)水平。

　　1. 浪費(fèi)時(shí)間、影響學(xué)習(xí)；2. 總聽(tīng)對(duì)聽(tīng)覺(jué)有害；3. 浪費(fèi)金錢。

　　1. 合理利用；2. 控制時(shí)間。

　　參考范文

　　Dear Editor,

　　Recently, our class had a discussion about whether middle school students should listen to MP3 player.

　　40% of them agree with the idea, saying that as a middle school student, it is fashionable to do so. Besides, you can relax while listening to the music. Thirdly, with the help of MP3 player, we can listen to English and improve our English level. Others, however, hold the opposite idea. Firstly, it has a bad effect on our studies as it takes time. What’s more, listening too much does harm to the hearing. Thirdly, it is a waste of money to buy an MP3 player.

　　In my opinion, we should make good use of an MP3 player and limit the time for listening if we do want to use it.

　　Yours,

　　LiHua

　　【解析】

　　試題分析：考查開(kāi)放性作文寫作,開(kāi)放性作文給出了一個(gè)話題，并有部分的文字提示。給考生自由發(fā)揮的余地較大。對(duì)于考生的綜合能力要求較高，要求考生有很強(qiáng)的謀篇布局的能力和組織要點(diǎn)的能力。在完成開(kāi)放性作文時(shí)，首先要選擇自己熟悉的短語(yǔ)或者句型，在你的能力范圍之內(nèi)，選擇句式時(shí)要賦予變化，因?yàn)檫@樣你才可以更好的駕馭。同時(shí)也要選擇合適的連接詞，把各個(gè)要點(diǎn)組織成一個(gè)完整的整體

　　【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】范文中運(yùn)用一些常見(jiàn)的短語(yǔ)agree with同意；listening to；with the help of在…幫助下；have an effect on對(duì)…有影響；What’s more更多的是；do harm to對(duì)…有害；a waste of浪費(fèi)…；

　　考點(diǎn)： 提綱類作文